I like to think that
every poet has a different set of experiences and neurological makeup that make
their poems unique and different. There are literally thousands of different
choices that poets make whenever they write a poem. Their structure, word
choice, content, and more is always variable and can be crafted in so many
different ways, but why do we think some styles or poems are better than
others? What makes each person decide whether or not they like a poem?
Whenever I think about
what aspects of a poem I really enjoy, I am first drawn to the way the poem
looks as a whole. Before even reading, I'll look at the poem and see if it
looks appealing. Many poets take their aesthetic into consideration, especially
if they are writing to a specific audience that has particular taste in
aesthetic. Last week I wrote about Madisen Kuhn, whose poems have a
minimalistic aesthetic. She often uses short lines and little to no
capitalization or punctuation, which is often a unique and desired look.
Another poet who
considered the way a poem looks is e e cummings, whose poems are noted for the
way they are uniquely structured to almost give a visual aspect to the poem.
hist whist
little ghostthings
tip-toe
twinkle-toe
little twitchy
witches and tingling
goblins
hob-a-nob hob-a-nob
little hoppy happy
toad in tweeds
tweeds
little itchy mousies
with scuttling
eyes rustle and run and
hidehidehide
whisk
whisk look out for the old woman
with the wart on her nose
what she’ll do to yer
nobody knows
for she knows the devil ooch
the devil ouch
the devil
ach the great
green
dancing
devil
devil
devil
devil
wheeEEE
hist whist
little ghostthings
tip-toe
twinkle-toe
little twitchy
witches and tingling
goblins
hob-a-nob hob-a-nob
little hoppy happy
toad in tweeds
tweeds
little itchy mousies
with scuttling
eyes rustle and run and
hidehidehide
whisk
whisk look out for the old woman
with the wart on her nose
what she’ll do to yer
nobody knows
for she knows the devil ooch
the devil ouch
the devil
ach the great
green
dancing
devil
devil
devil
devil
wheeEEE
Another aspect of a poem
that I think sets some apart is figurative language and how a poet employs
different techniques to get their message across. I think in some cases, poets
can use figurative language that is intentionally vague so that it can be
interpreted differently depending on someone's background of experiences that
can shape various meanings for the poem. Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, and
many poets from the 1800s and 1900s spend a lot of effort on crafting vivid
imagery, which is something I really appreciate in a poem.
And one other thing that
can make a good poem is just plain confusion! What I mean by this is that
some poems don't immediately make sense at all! If a poem says straight out
what it means and what its goals are, there is much less investment into the
poem. It's like a puzzle - at first it can be complex or difficult, but once
you figure out its meaning, it is so rewarding. One example is the poem "This Is
Just To Say" by William Carlos Williams
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
This poem, at first, seems
like it has no deeper meaning. But some careful analysis will give insight into
lusting for something that is not yours, the trials of poverty and desire, and
loyalty and forgiveness that exist in a family. Without the "mask" of
beautiful words and artfully crafted phrases, there is no investment in the
poet's message, and I think readers don't feel as much connection to the poet.
The final thing that I look for in a poem
is shortness. Personally, I find long, epic poems much more draining and hard
to read. My exception is Poe, whose longer poems are necessary for telling
stories. However, if we go too long, like Beowulf or many Greek poems, they
lose the attention of the reader because often they are not divided into parts
that mimic chapters.
I really enjoy this topic because I remember learning about the many ways to use rthetoric and aestics in AP English Literature and Composition. We learned how to make a poem appeal to a certain audience or represent a certain theme. It's literally amazing how many techniques exist to give poems more "life" and character.
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